Comments on: POEM: Come with me, Shelby

By: jasoncrane.org » Two days of poetry (part 2): St. John Fisher College

jasoncrane.org » Two days of poetry (part 2): St. John Fisher College — Sat, 08 May 2010 15:10:07 +0000

[...] the military, and his experiences certainly inform his writing. Matt read two of my poems, too – “Come with me, Shelby” and [...]

By: Jason Crane

Jason Crane — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 03:17:32 +0000

Thanks, Robin!

By: Robin

Robin — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 00:08:18 +0000

Beautifully written. I wasn’t expecting this when you started with Dunkin Donuts!

By: Jason Crane

Jason Crane — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 18:25:12 +0000

Thanks, Elaine.

By: Elaine Heveron

Elaine Heveron — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 18:18:29 +0000

Poetry is not memoir–(we have to keep reminding people who know us). It’s the voice of the poem. I’m enjoying the voice in your poem: Come With Me, Shelby

By: Jason Crane

Jason Crane — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 17:55:10 +0000

Thanks, Matt.

By: Matt Quinn

Matt Quinn — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 16:00:07 +0000

Sounds like a great plan. I like!

By: Jason Crane

Jason Crane — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 15:26:04 +0000

Thanks, Marie! This is a work of fiction, but I like to think she said yes.

By: Marie

Marie — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 15:20:29 +0000

I hope she said yes! I used to work in a Dunkin’ Donuts. I would have loved for someone to take me away from the crushing sweetness.

By: Jason Crane

Jason Crane — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 15:09:54 +0000

True, true.

By: Dan Rako

Dan Rako — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 12:39:25 +0000

Cream filling trumps tree sap, almost every time…